lovely
bitter
sometimes sweet
tastety dreams
sway at my feet
precious
vivid
mindless song
twilight dwindling
love is strong
pointless
hopeless
saddened wings
forever blown
forever stings
love which held
love which heart
love which always
falls apart
above
the crakened
blackened sky
below
the broken heart
it cries
seeps
below the sands
where lovers walk
creeps
above the plans
where cupids stalk
pounding
ringing
in my head
voices
screaming
love is dead
fallen petals
on the shore
sinking hopes
forever more
leaving
going
coming back
hating
loving you like that
till now
the hour glass
will keep
this knot is tied
this love is steep
and
when my life
carelessly slow
plead my life
to thee
forever known...
was inspired by the writter Danille Steele, i wanted to create something brilliant out of simple word play
ReplyDeleteabsolutely lovely...I hear, see, feel a Song...
ReplyDeletePeaceLove&Smiles,
CherylFaith
thanks, Cheryl, am glad you like..
ReplyDeleteThis is a gem.
ReplyDeleteI love this piece... the rhythm and flow is simple, but you build a great picture with the words :)
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