Thursday, December 2, 2010

Bitter sweet love

lovely
bitter
sometimes sweet

tastety dreams
sway at my feet

precious
vivid
mindless song

twilight dwindling
love is strong

pointless
hopeless
saddened wings

forever blown
forever stings

love which held
love which heart
love which always 
falls apart

above
the crakened
 blackened sky

below
the broken heart
it cries

seeps
below the sands
where lovers walk

creeps
above the plans 
where cupids stalk

pounding
ringing
in my head

voices
 screaming
love is dead

fallen petals
on the shore
sinking hopes
forever more

leaving
going
coming back

hating
loving you like that

till now
the hour glass
will keep

this knot is tied
this love is steep
and

when my life
carelessly slow
plead my life
to thee
forever known...

5 comments:

  1. was inspired by the writter Danille Steele, i wanted to create something brilliant out of simple word play

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  2. absolutely lovely...I hear, see, feel a Song...

    PeaceLove&Smiles,
    CherylFaith

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  3. thanks, Cheryl, am glad you like..

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  4. This is a gem.

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  5. I love this piece... the rhythm and flow is simple, but you build a great picture with the words :)

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